Ormeh sent this to me this evening, freestyle. I liked it. I think you will too.
The month was moving towards its end
The evening was bright and
The crickets were chirping happily around the bend
…there sat a girl
Just staring around looking like she was out for the atmosphere
To the unobservant eye she was just enjoying the evening
But she was imagining a life with more meaning
Just a normal girl
Not particularly pretty
Not particularly witty
Not particularly smart
Not particularly flat
Not particularly loved
Not particularly wanted
She was.. The poster girl for average
She had a few friends
Had a few laughs
Met a few guys
Had a few flings
What people didn’t know about Grey
(As was her name)
Was that she wanted more
She wanted more than a few mutual friends
She wanted the bffs; friends to the end,
Like was portrayed in movies.
She wanted more than a few flings
She wanted that fiery passionate love
She wanted that calm undying love
A companion to share experiences with
Even the little ones
Really just any kind of love would do
So long as it wasn’t the one between kins.
She stared at the sky
No stars tonight she thought with a sigh
There was nothing visible other than clouds
And this was how she saw her life
Beautiful at first but empty upon closer scrutiny
She found a star
Twas but a lone star
A lone star with no companions close or afar
She wanted her life to be like a beautiful night
The moon surrounded by a lot of stars
Beyond that not particularly beautiful smile
Beneath the girl plain to sight
Was a typical girl that wished to be loved
For deep down she was a lonely girl
A lone star.
“Not particularly flat..” Yup! That was D right thing to say. 😉
6 thoughts on “A Lone Star”
This post…brilliant. oh, and Grey needs to meet me ASAP. Ormeh, Chris, have that arranged.
Again. Brilliant. Easy-flowing, weaves smoothly in the head and on the tongue. LOVE IT.
And…yes. not particularly flat. A-cups are environmentally toxic…
Tell me somebody caught.. D hint.. Anybody?
I did, blooDy pavat.
Poetry… Something new… Like a breathe of fresh air.
hmm… wonderin who grey is… dose hints dosent point ti any1 in particular