I apologise that it’s been a while since we put up anything. Been busy, life and its works. But you know us, always ready to kill you with awesomeness. Right Tele?
Teleola: *giggles sheepishly while reading text from lover*
Anyway. If you ever read the Mrs Pollifax stories by Dorothy Gilman, about the straw-hatted, grandmotherly, sexagenarian CIA superspy with a penchant for deadly judo, then you’ll know what to expect.
Enjoy abeg.. 😀
Inspired by True events from the life of the greatest woman I know.
The figure darted out of the dark bushes to her right and right into the glare of the headlights. Mrs Adebowale slammed her right foot hard on the brakes, the 2004 Chrysler 300C, pistons charging angrily, slid sideways into a crushing stop.
Who the hell was that?
Forty-six year old Christina Adebowale was no stranger to danger. Born in Onitsha, Eastern Region at the onset of the Biafran war, her instincts had been honed from birth. And right now, her instincts urged her to lift her foot off the brake and zoom off.
Christina Adebowale pressed a button that locked the doors. The reassuring click as the locks all snapped shut buoyed her. Then she glanced at her rearview mirror. The road was dark and empty. Where was the person? All the way down for where she was up until perhaps Lagos, the Benin-Lagos expressway looked as empty and dark as the plains of Mor…
A figure slammed against her driver-side window. Mrs Adebowale let out a shriek. Her hands flew to her gear lever, and she almost zoomed off then. She wondered why she didn’t later on. But at that moment, something stilled her hand, and her heart.
The figure outside the window was a woman in her late thirties, (young by Mrs Adebowale’s standards). The woman was dressed in a dark green tracksuit, and she looked about to die. The suit was torn in several places and dark red blood stains coated her face, her clothes, and matted in her hair alongside a bramble of twigs and leaves and sand.
“Please help me! Please!” The woman said. Mouthed more like, because the heavy density glass partition between them, allowed very little sound to filter through.
If one had asked her, before now, if she would stop on the road for a random stranger, Mrs Adebowale would have replied in a vehement negative. But here she was at 8:05pm, parked right in the centre of the Benin-Lagos expressway, at the section that leads through the Ovia forest, considering whether to wind down her glass to talk to a total stranger, who not only seemed mad, but was also probably dangerous.
But then Mrs Adebowale never did anything ordinarily.
Only a few hours ago, she had been rounding up a lecture on ‘Mis-accountancy and the future of Nigeria in the Global market‘ in Akure. The lecture had started later than scheduled, and at the end, she had to choose between sleeping in a hotel in Akure and entering her car for the two hour drive home.
Mrs Adebowale had driven into a hotel and asked the manager if they had a room with a big TV. The surprised manager had replied “Of course!” She had then asked if they received TVTV, to which the even more surprised man had replied “No. But we have DSTV”
Mrs Adebowale had walked out. Bad enough she wouldn’t be able to watch her TV show with her daughter in the comfort of her home, but not to watch Jumong at all?
She had entered her car, and called her daughter. “Hey, I’m on my way. In case I don’t get back on time, record the Jumong oh!”
Then she put her headlights on full beam, and drove into the road.
Mrs Adebowale wound down her window.
“Please, madam! Help me! Kidnappers!” The woman in the tattered tracksuit blurted out, tears and mucus running down her face.
At that moment, a shot rang out in the darkness. The report all the louder in the stillness that was the lonely night. The woman in the tracksuit let out a short squeal and made to dart across the road to the other side. Mrs Adebowale made her decision.
“Get in!” She hollered.
The tracksuit lady needed no further cajoling. Jumping in through the open back door, she lay flat on the seat.
Spinning the car around in first gear, Mrs Adebowale once more pointed the nose for Benin as she stepped hard on the accelerator. The vehicle jumped forward, and not a moment too soon. In her rearview mirror, she could see two men run into the road, long, dangerous looking weapons in their hands.
Mrs Adebowale flashed instantly to the Korean TV series she watched with her daughter. What was that action one? Bridal Mask? Twisting the steering as she saw the muzzle of one of the guns flash, she tossed the nimble car to the left and then back to the right. The gunshots seemed louder and more ominous. From the back seat, the tracksuit lady was sobbing and praying, but it seemed they were unhurt. The kidnappers kept shooting, but the car was out of range.
The speedometer needle climbed up to 100mph, then 110mph. Mrs Adebowale held it there for five minutes. Then as the adrenaline supply began to taper off, she eased to 70mph.
“So talk to me! Who are you? What happened just now?” Her normal calm voice came out as a high-pitched cry.
“My name is Mrs Roberts, and those men kidnapped me.”
Jite Roberts told the story of how she had come back home from the gym after work (Mrs Adebowale nodded appreciatively), and while horning at her gate for the kids to come open, a trio of gunmen had suddenly appeared at her side. Wrenching open the door of her vehicle before she had time to react, they had forced her into theirs and drove off.
“They blindfolded me. My neighbours couldn’t help me! Everybody was scared. The kidnappers shot into the air.” Jite Roberts said.
While she talked, Mrs Adebowale listened, and kept a sharp eye on the rearview mirror. While she had no fears that the kidnappers couldn’t run her down, not while she drove this six-cylinder monster at least, she was however concerned that they hadn’t given chase. There were no tell-tale headlights in the rear. It raised questions, and whatever raised questions didn’t go well with Mrs Adebowale.
“Have they demanded a ransom?”
“Fifteen million,” Jite replied succintly. Her voice clearer now as the sobs subsided.
They had extracted her husband’s international number from her and demanded the sum. The man, his voice breaking in panic, had insisted he needed time to wire the money from the UK. So they had roughed her up, while he listened, till he almost cried over the phone. Satisfied he was going to pay up, and that she was comatose, the kidnappers had retreated to a corner to smoke a joint. That was when she crawled away.
Mrs Adebowale admired her courage, but a question nagged at her.
“How many of them where smoking when you ran?”
“The three of them.”
“But only two were shooting at us earlier.”
“Maybe the other went into town to get…” Her voice trailed off into despair.
At that moment, the roar of a powerful engine tore through the quiet night and powerful headlights, beaming at full intensity, cut a swathe in the darkness barely ten metres away on the right shoulder of the road.
There was no time to react, only action. Old age they say blunts one’s reaction time, but intuition is honed by years of experience.
After lifting her foot off the accelerator just a moment, her naked instincts urguing her to stop the vehicle, Mrs Adebowale stepped harder on the throttle. The big car lurched forward, the HEMI engine churning sparks from the exhaust. But it wasn’t fast enough. The front end of the Toyota Hilux slammed into the back of the Chrysler with enough force, it seemed like the clashing of rival Transformers. The Chrysler spun in a screeching circle, the women inside screaming for dear life. The Hilux went on, the engine barely clacking now, to smash into the median. The force of the impact caused the truck to roll back, headlights casting crazy shadows in every corner. Instantly two men jumped out. One of them, the one on the passenger side, was cradling a rifle. He stepped right up to the driverside window and smashed the glass in with the butt of his gun. Mrs Adebowale tried to drive off, but the crash had totaled the rear axle and some function that caused the vehicle to rise on its haunches had been disabled. The Chrysler merely groaned.
“Get out now!” The kidnapper yelled.
In the back seat, her passenger side door mangled from the crash, Jite had powered down the window and scrambled through it, all her thoughts on escape.
“Hey!” The gun man yelled to his accomplice who rather than be dressed in jeans and a T-shirt, was wearing a stylish-looking blazer over plain trousers. “She wan’ run!”
His accomplice darted around the car in pursuit of the rapidly fleeing Jite.
In the moment his attention was split, Mrs Adebowale had another of her Korean flashes. Unlocking and opening the door in one smooth motion, she slammed all of her 98KG weight behind the heavy steel door and into the knee of the kidnapper. She heard a satisfying crunch as he yelped in pain. Quickly, she drew the door back as through to shut it. The kidnapper, his gun harmlessly at his side now, reflexively bent to massage his hurting leg.
“I go kill you to…” He never finished the sentence.
Propelling forward again, all of her fear and anger, at the smashed Chrysler no less, converted into fury. Mrs Adebowale let out a war cry as she swung the door into his head. The sound was like the thud you hear in a gym when the weights are dropped unceremoniously to the floor.
Gboom! That’s the sound that best describes it.
The kidnapper crumpled to the floor. Stepping out of the vehicle, operating on pure instinct and healthy doses of epinephrine now, Mrs Adebowale picked up the fallen rifle. He assumed it was an AK-47, being the only rifle she was familiar with from the movies. On the other side of the car, dragging Jite by her hair was the well-dressed accomplice. His face slightly sweaty from the chase and oddly bewildered by the turn of events.
“What are you doing with that gun?” He asked stupidly.
In the spill of lights from the reflections cast by the powerful headlamps of both vehicles, it was easy to read the shock and confusion on his face.
“Let her go!” Mrs Adebowale stammered. “Please, for God’s sake, let her go! Or I will shoot you!”
Her words, perhaps the faltering nature of them, seemed to have an awakening effect on the kidnapper. Her tightened his hold and dragged his captive closer to himself. Jite yelped in pain.
“Let her go!”
“Hand over that gun.” He said calmly. “You don’t even know how to operate it.”
From his calm, measured tones, Mrs Adebowale surmised he was the leader of the operation. She panicked then, and very nearly dropped the gun. Tears rolled down her cheeks.
“Why are you doing this? Why? I don’t want to die,” she sobbed. “I didn’t want to have anything to do with this.”
In instant solidarity, Jite burst out in fresh tones of brand-new tears.
The man inched closer, oblivious to their cries, his eyes on the gun. He was around the boot of the Chrysler now, still holding Jite, barely five feet away.
“Just give me the gun, and then you can go your own way. This is not your problem.”
Jite started wailing. “No! Nooo! He will kill us!”
Mrs Adebowale gripped the gun by the barrel, her knees shook, fear in every fibre of her being. She extended it slowly, her hands unsteady, ready to hand it over to the kidnapper. At that moment two things happened, without which this story would have ended quite differently.
The first one. The kidnapper, in a definite state of amplified hubris, said; “No. Nothing would happen to you. Too much wahala this night sef. I just want to take my man and go. Both of you can leave too.”
Now, Mrs Adebowale held a position in Management at her company, and she had heard just about all the usual lies. And that statement was right up the charts with, “My car broke down” and “I think I came down with something last night“.
The second thing that happened was; the partner on the floor, the one with a broken knee and a crack in his skull wide enough to fit a Tecno Phantom®, suddenly stirred and muttered something. His well-dressed colleague glanced down and Mrs Adebowale’s hand swung up and sideways.
Now, the kidnapper had solid reflexes and a well-built physique, and his gaze was in the direction of the gun. So he saw it coming well in time. Time enough to raise his left forearm and absorb most of the (painful) shock on his bicep. He pushed Jite to the ground with his other arm and took a step towards Mrs Adebowale before the woman had time to take another swing, after all, she was probably in her fifties and a rifle is quite a heavy toy. It was impossible for him to know Mrs Adebowale plays squash every weekend at The Benin Club.
The rifle flew backwards and swung back in a two-handed swing that had all the ferociousness of a Nadal serve. 120 pounds of pure motive force swung into Kidnapper no 1, shattering his left radius and gouging a deep crease into the side of his skull. The man slammed against the side of the Chrysler and slid to the floor unconcious. Whirling around, before she had time to reconsider her options, Mrs Adebowale knocked the butt of the rifle into the groggy, unbelieving head of Kidnapper no 2 in a very familiar pounding motion and shut his lights out for the last time that night.
It was over. Eight minutes and forty-three seconds from crash to rifle-butt-in-head-of-woman-kidnapper.
Adrenaline still surging through her veins in quick bursts, she almost slapped Jite when the woman grabbed her from behind, and in between prayers of thanksgiving, began to cry and weep profusely.
“It’s alright. It’s alright, Jite. It’s alright.”
In GRA Benin City, Candy Adebowale tapped a button on the remote control and the PVR TVTV decoder started to record the lates episode of Jumong. She wondered how long it will take her mother to get home.
Mrs Adebowale notified a friend at the Department of State Security (DSS) over the phone, about the events of the night, and a team was immediately dispatched in assault gear, and armed with FN F2000s, to the scene at the Benin-Lagos expressway, where a nervous and drawstring taut Mrs Adebowale stood sentry over two slightly comatose bodies of well-built men and a weak-at-the-knees, completely relieved ex-hostage.
After some cajoling, Jite Roberts directed the men of the DSS to the spot where she had been held captive, where after a very brief gun-battle, the kidnappers surrendered, bullets haven been exhausted anyway. The rifle found in Mrs Adebowale’s possession was found to contain only two shells in its clip and was identified as an AKM.
Mrs Adebowale got home safe the next morning at about 3:00am, haven been escorted home in an unmarked white police Hilux, her statement received and sent to Abuja. The Chrysler was taken to Lagos (causing a two hour traffic jam the next morning at it was lifted by crane) where repairs are currently ongoing. Jite Roberts began preparations to move with her family to the UK from where she would maintain a steady correspondence with her saviour. Both Saviours.
Mrs Adebowale looks forward to her next adventure!
THE END..for now.
- Based on actual events
- I do not aim to make light of the situations depicted in this story. Kidnapping in Nigeria is a very real and present danger, and my heart goes to any and all who have experienced or known someone who experienced a kidnapping. We’ll get past this scourge I tell you.
- The Chrysler 300C has been renamed the Lancia Thema but still remains the car I drive in my wettest fantasies
- The constant repetition of the name ‘Mrs Adebowale’ is deliberate, a throwback from the old Mrs Pollifax stories and my amusement with Lee Child’s Reacher novels.
- Mrs Adebowale drives a Toyota Rav 4 while her Chrysler is being repaired.
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Peace to Nigeria.
PS: Abi you see now, nobody died in this story! Before you people would be commenting on my psychopathic tendencies.
26 thoughts on “Mrs Adebowale helps a Stranger”
LOL. “Jite”…SMH. SMH again. One more SMH for the road.
Ah, well. Janus, god of action feem has begun again. A few typos, but it made a good read 😀
I didn’t read Mrs Pollifax, but I read something similar from an author I don’t remember now. Being a sexist, I was mildly pissed that women were beating men up like that.
I am still pissed (<.<)
Teach you what my dear..? Tell me..anything.
Awesome! Just Awesome!! Nigerian thriller! Wow. Short of words. Keep up the good work.I know it’s not beans
Thank you! Thank you!
Yes oh! Not beans..I know. Tell them..*hides beans pot containing writing jazz*
Yes! Finally! A female action heroine (Anglais shey?shey?)
I REALLY REALLY enjoyed reading this..What i love most about it, is how descriptive the story was;like, I could picture each scene in my head..thoroughly entertaining.
Look at you..using words like ‘heroine’..wow..
I like how you REALLY REALLY enjoyed a story about women thrashing muscular menfolk..(¬_¬)
few typos and a woman beating Men up, pls don’t write another adventure of a lady again. You are a feminist
Shuuuuuuu!!! <_< Hian!!!
What is wrong with this one?
Risins y I cri evritiem..(˘̩̩_˘̩̩̩ƪ)
Ah. The story. Too tame for my taste. And my namesake just had to be a sniveling female abi?
LOOOOL! See your mouth..because you have namesake sef.
Tame though..what did you expect? It’s based on true events you know..
Execellent Write up.. Ur descriptions are beautifully vivid. Found myself following the story line by line. Hopefully this scourge is no more
Thanks for reading Doctor G.
I have not read the Mrs. Pollifax stories.
From the title gan, I knew this would be different. Thanks for carrying us along every step of the tale. I could not help but think you would insert riddles and leave us to put pieces together. Not my fault. Na your way be dat.
Did anyone feel like they were reading an action Enid Blyton storybook?
Based on true life events you say. Awesome grandma. I hope to be just this. A butt-kicking, squash-playing,Jumong-watching (I have no idea what Jumong is), Chrysler-driving, stunt-pulling, knee-and-skull-cracking granny.
I talk too much, abi?
Well..truth be told, there are riddles. Just not the kind everyone would piece. Those in the err..know..know what to look out for.
Jumong, is the shiznit! Especially among Bini mothers and their offspring.
Once again, I feel I’m selling an author. But go read the old Dorothy Gilman books. They were fun. Part of my formative years..with memories of Agege bread and fish..
I’m not Bini.
P.S. – I was not giggling like a sheep.
Wow! Just wow! Not even Nollywood material. It’s too awesome.
That is a compliment? LOOL. That is a compliment.
Thank you! Keep reading..
Biko get serious and write a novel or do lots of script writing and be our saviour 4rm Nollywood dumb scripts. Talent must not waste u hear? As an edo boy you musn’t carry last. Interesting read as always
This is the shit. Like, literally, it starts with a fart – a very loud one – drawing attention to the whole ass…ault and wham, it became the shit! The big, diarrheal shit, splattering everywhere.
Boss…you are a boss. Teach me. I will learn.
Classes hold 5-6 most fridays.
Thanks again, scatological praise drives me to ecstatic frenzies.. 😀